Wednesday, October 7, 2009

I cant put into words how the adjective describes the nouns so much better...HELP NEEDED?

閳ユ窏is chestnut brown hair hung over his freckly skin, and his green eyes were hidden behind circle framed glasses.閳?



By using adjectives it doesn閳ユ獩 just tell you he has hair because his hair could be dull and grey, it tells you he has chestnut brown hair.



DOES THAT MAKE SENSE OR IS THERE A BETTER WAY OF WORDING IT?



I cant put into words how the adjective describes the nouns so much better...HELP NEEDED?

hi



I cant put into words how the adjective describes the nouns so much better...HELP NEEDED?

Yes and yes.



I cant put into words how the adjective describes the nouns so much better...HELP NEEDED?

How about, 'Adjectives are describing words which let you give more details such as hair, skin or eye colour'. Any good?



I cant put into words how the adjective describes the nouns so much better...HELP NEEDED?

Adjectives modify nouns, that means they answer questions about them, and create a picture for the reader. So if you wrote "His hair hung over his skin and his eyes were hidden behind glasses", it does not make a vivid picture for the reader. The reader might ask, What sort of hair? What sort of skin? By adding adjectives,the reader is better able to imagine and visualise the character. He or she could now even draw a picture on a piece of paper from the detail in the sentence.

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